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Sinome
This has a special outlook and of course my need for my glasses makes it very touching. Without them I wouldn't be able to share in the beauty of your writing luv.

posted by WileyJohn on May 5, 2011 at 11:12 PM | link to this | reply

where would some of us be without glasses

posted by Lanetay on May 5, 2011 at 8:01 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
There is that moment between sleeping and being awake that has its own magic, and you have captured it well...

posted by Nautikos on May 5, 2011 at 6:07 PM | link to this | reply

Life can be so tough while awake.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 5, 2011 at 5:12 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful, can quite relate to this Sinome.

posted by shobana on May 5, 2011 at 4:32 PM | link to this | reply

Nice one, Marta...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on May 5, 2011 at 3:23 PM | link to this | reply

i want some glasses that do that!!!!  What a great poem - loved the image, loved the thought - great work xoxox

posted by lionreign on May 5, 2011 at 8:10 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting Simone but sad if one reads it carefully one day perhaps it will be possible hopefully. I liked this poem.

posted by C_C_T on May 5, 2011 at 1:37 AM | link to this | reply

wonderful darling. i think we can keep a wish like that even while awake.
yes I think I will.

posted by Kabu on May 4, 2011 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply

When I was a kid I wanted to go see a movie called thirteen ghosts on my 7th birthday. They had glasses with red and blue lenses, one color if you wanted to see the demons, and one color if you didn't want to see them...I got confused and found that I wasn't as brave as I thought when the monster flashed before my eyes. We went home then with my father laughing all the way.

posted by UtahJay on May 4, 2011 at 6:33 PM | link to this | reply