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Re: Whoever he is, I think he must be an idiot.

Just about some things.  Something rather specially smart in other areas.  I have faith that he will win through his own baggage sooner or later.  If I can help him do that, I will with my whole heart--now that it is actually getting whole again.  If I can be there after, that would be grand, too.  Mostly, though, I hope he heals.  Even if I am not to be there for it.

He is not to blame for my crash/burn.  Triggered it, yes. but I don't think willingly.  Sometimes pieces of the truth can be sharp and cut deep.  But truth is what I need and want.  Pain and fear of pain made me hide from signs of it.  But Truth, as it is said, will out. 

posted by Randir on May 2, 2011 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thanks for visiting and commenting Riversidepoet.

I am not sure I understand what you mean by 'safely written.'

I think to share this now would only increase his pain, but I will not argue with what Fate leads him to. 

posted by Randir on April 28, 2011 at 5:05 PM | link to this | reply

SAFELY WRITTEN, THOUGHTFUL INSIGHT, BUT MAYBE SOMEDAY WITH SOME TWIST OF FATE IT WILL BE READ BY THE ONE IT WAS WRITTEN FOR AND EASE THEIR PAIN. GREAT POEM

posted by Riversidepoet on April 28, 2011 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

N Your belief makes for a strong poem. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on April 27, 2011 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply

Whoever he is, I think he must be an idiot.

posted by Ciel on April 27, 2011 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

How very true; the pain of another can at times be far greater than our own! Very poignant imagery that was highlighted with self introspection for me! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 27, 2011 at 12:05 PM | link to this | reply