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2Philomena
Thank you so much I don't write poetry much anymore but I love to try. Be blessed

posted by Justi on June 27, 2011 at 5:46 PM | link to this | reply

Do you or have you ever lived there?
This was a very strong poem with an excellent metaphor we can all relate to.  For me I stayed inside the box of the things I couldn't do because I was afraid to launch out bravely into my poetry in case that failed too.  When I emerged from this box I found that writing was my true strength and at last gained faith in myself to pursue it.

posted by 2Philomena on June 27, 2011 at 4:23 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Riversidepoet on April 22, 2011 at 12:46 PM | link to this | reply

I would be elated to discuss Jesus but I am not one to enter into an open forum on politics, there are too many folks who respond cruelly when they disagree! I love a good debate but many do  not understand how to debate! Nice poem, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 22, 2011 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Ariala on April 22, 2011 at 5:29 AM | link to this | reply

I do like the thought of the box that holds us back from whatever we don't
want to face. it really is taking the easy way out.....I been known to do that.this is a really thought provoking work darling. Thank you.

posted by Kabu on April 21, 2011 at 5:06 PM | link to this | reply

an invisible box... yes...

posted by poet_prophetess on April 21, 2011 at 4:22 PM | link to this | reply

Good one ! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on April 21, 2011 at 2:46 PM | link to this | reply