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But you would be relieved of so much of your weight if you set it free, no?
posted by
Straightforward
on April 21, 2011 at 3:20 AM
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Sinome
{ And poems capture other moments. So your poem adds something original. A poem's a moment itself love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on April 20, 2011 at 8:22 PM
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The speaker came to the perfect conclusion, I feel.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 20, 2011 at 2:50 PM
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Such beautiful tragedy, you conjure tears with this one xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on April 20, 2011 at 8:34 AM
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Such a lovely poignant poem Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on April 19, 2011 at 11:28 PM
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Well you should write it perhaps Simone and keep it safe perhaps you could wrap up some of your sadness in the words and feel free even if you are not. Lovely poem
posted by
C_C_T
on April 19, 2011 at 10:19 PM
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Sinome
A sad poem, and a reminder not to forget to do the things that matter...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 19, 2011 at 8:23 PM
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very nice indeed.
posted by
poet_prophetess
on April 19, 2011 at 6:44 PM
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achingly sad, beautifully written, the poet that i love.
posted by
Kabu
on April 19, 2011 at 2:07 PM
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