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spoken directly to me...understood!
posted by
aceblade
on April 13, 2011 at 6:46 AM
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Believe
Your poem has an amazing flow. You really made me laugh with the lines 'my life is a barrel of monkeys, my thoughts are a ball of yarn.' You have really captured the mood that to proceed in life you must have faith in yourself.
posted by
2Philomena
on April 13, 2011 at 4:28 AM
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There can be no light without darkness, no right without wrong, I liked it...SuZanne
posted by
psychicwarrior
on April 13, 2011 at 3:03 AM
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I liked this one...and I do believe.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 12, 2011 at 11:01 AM
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