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very good poem, i think we have similar styles. The word structure was delicate and forceful at the same time, very good

posted by mister_murder on April 7, 2011 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

you have beautiful rich imagery and excellent word choice in this poem

posted by lionreign on April 7, 2011 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

What a glorious poem! A perfect descent! I loved the beak parts and holy words pour! How utterly spiritual! A fine message and one of praise, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 7, 2011 at 1:59 AM | link to this | reply

Absolutely lovely descent Philomena.

posted by shobana on April 5, 2011 at 8:27 PM | link to this | reply