Comments on haiku no. 43

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Ah!  Naut writes poetry, too!  I like it, glad I found this!  Your haiku response is so appropriate (and encouraging - I'm still waiting for the breath of warm air).

posted by juliah on April 5, 2011 at 1:09 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks for your comment! As you rightly say, traditional celebrations and rituals are followed more in rural areas, but there is still a large percentage of city dwellers who follow them!

posted by Nita09 on April 4, 2011 at 10:17 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice Naut, I could visualize the whole thing! Shelly   

posted by sam444 on April 3, 2011 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

I just read Juliah's poem and I think the haiku complements it very well Naut.

posted by shobana on April 3, 2011 at 2:24 AM | link to this | reply

Naut, funny you should mention robins.....
We are deluged by them this spring - I honestly have never seen so many this early....and I don't even mind them when they start chirping before the sun is even up......

posted by Rumor on April 2, 2011 at 3:24 PM | link to this | reply

I can just see that bird...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 2, 2011 at 12:55 PM | link to this | reply

Nautikos

' Hopefully as your poem conveys the sentiment of the robin Naut. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on April 2, 2011 at 11:21 AM | link to this | reply

I love it. 
My three-year-old Megan from Florida, where they do not have robins, saw a robin in my tree and was thrilled because she had recognized it from a little book she has.

posted by TAPS. on April 2, 2011 at 6:20 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent!

posted by Nita09 on April 2, 2011 at 2:31 AM | link to this | reply

finally you posted a poem I have been waiting for this

posted by Tzippy on April 1, 2011 at 11:10 PM | link to this | reply

Beautifully done Naut... xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on April 1, 2011 at 10:25 PM | link to this | reply

Very light and spring-y! I liked your previous poem, too. - Bob

posted by 2902 on April 1, 2011 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

really well done Matey.. Good Joice of words. LOL.....

posted by Kabu on April 1, 2011 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

Yes,I liked it in her comments too.

posted by UtahJay on April 1, 2011 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply