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I liked your description of landscapes, heart and country. There is a quiet and simple flow to it and yes,I
miss my mom too. When I wash the dishes or pick a flower her hands are always there to look at.
posted by
CUPLETS
on March 10, 2011 at 8:08 PM
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A mother can never be replaced
I remember my mother so often. -chuck
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 8, 2011 at 9:58 PM
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Sinome
What a poignant, touching poem...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 8, 2011 at 4:23 PM
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BEAUTIFUL POEM, SO GOOD TO REMEMBER THE LITTLE THINGS ABOUT THE ONES WE'VE LOVE, ESPECIALLY MOM. HOW I MISS MINE, THE GLIDER ON THE PORCH THAT WE USE TO SIT IN BRINGS HER TO MIND, THE WIND CHIMES THAT WE'RE HERS BLOWING IN THE WIND, SHE SEEMS TO BE EVERYWHERE AND THAT IS NICE, I'D HAVE IT NO OTHER WAY, GOD BLESS YOU.
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 8, 2011 at 3:59 PM
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I miss you mom
Powerful imagery.
posted by
2Philomena
on March 8, 2011 at 10:11 AM
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Lovely poem. It is interesting sometimes to put yourself in the place of your mother when things happen in your life, and as you grow older, and are in similar situations that your parent has been in during their life. Looking at the decisions they made in the circumstances, and what they did and then going through those experiences can be thought provoking. My mother is dead now, and I think of her, and experiences she has experienced; and that I have experienced after her death sometimes. I can relate to your words. Great poem.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on March 8, 2011 at 4:51 AM
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sad poem of you missing your mom
posted by
Lanetay
on March 7, 2011 at 10:54 PM
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Beautiful poem for your mom Sinome - it is special.
posted by
shobana
on March 7, 2011 at 3:08 PM
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I think we all think about the same sort of things in those melancholy places, and I think of us who have lost their mothers always remember them when they find themselves, like their mothers, in a similar place of mind. A wonderful poem well written.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 7, 2011 at 12:36 PM
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Perhaps she had similar thoughts and made similar observations. I miss my Mom too....
posted by
Troosha
on March 7, 2011 at 11:46 AM
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A poem that anyone who has lost a loved can very much relate to.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 7, 2011 at 11:12 AM
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Sinome
® Birds get through and bring you through it all love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on March 7, 2011 at 6:36 AM
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I totally relate to this...I miss my mom, too...beautifully done, Simone!
posted by
Ariala
on March 7, 2011 at 4:26 AM
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