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I can feel the wind..
.. and I see the trees, the path.. and the sun as it changes colors.. .. Beautiful poem..

posted by orcalion on March 28, 2011 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

w A poem that talks to the trees. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on February 26, 2011 at 2:51 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely vivid description

posted by lionreign on February 25, 2011 at 6:28 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful imagery - excellent poem.

posted by shobana on February 24, 2011 at 6:20 PM | link to this | reply

this is like taking that walk myself.

But then, I would... 

You make me want to find a poem inside, and bring it out.

posted by Ciel on February 24, 2011 at 11:48 AM | link to this | reply

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thanks Utah-Jay for the comment

posted by eburns111 on February 24, 2011 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

Re: eb, no wonder you've been mssing from here for a while :)! - Ash
it's been a while, can't find the time and when i have the time i'm just exhausted, not able to write when my mind is preoccupied with so many other things, I need to go see the hypnotist to clear my mind, i wonder what would flow out

posted by eburns111 on February 24, 2011 at 11:23 AM | link to this | reply

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thanks BC-A for reading. My planting of myself, I have traveled those paths that few less have taken, but have learned along the way

posted by eburns111 on February 24, 2011 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply

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its too late for that the climb has already begun

posted by eburns111 on February 24, 2011 at 11:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444
thanks for the comment, i had partially wrote it quite some time ago, knew where i wanted to go with it but how to say it was the challenge. It could of turned out to have been a much longer Journey but cut it short.

posted by eburns111 on February 24, 2011 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Riversidepoet
glad you liked it

posted by eburns111 on February 24, 2011 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

WHAT A BEAUTIUFL JOURNEY YOU HAVE TAKEN ME ON

posted by Riversidepoet on February 24, 2011 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

I was on that climb with you all the way and then the close was magnificent! As long as it's light I think there's promise! sam 

posted by sam444 on February 24, 2011 at 5:49 AM | link to this | reply

Well it was a hard climb  Eburns but interesting, I think I will read it again rather than take it on. 

posted by C_C_T on February 24, 2011 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply

w Yourself’s a good planting. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on February 23, 2011 at 8:13 PM | link to this | reply

eb, no wonder you've been mssing from here for a while :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on February 23, 2011 at 6:06 PM | link to this | reply

Even at the end the sun shines, nice thought, and a nice poem.

posted by UtahJay on February 23, 2011 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply