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Re: annicita
ty for the tip! will do
posted by
calia14
on March 1, 2011 at 7:06 AM
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interesting first draft...one thing that would really help is to have a larger font so that it is easier to follow...the writing is so compact here....will be back tomorrow to read the next 2 parts...good luck
posted by
Annicita
on February 28, 2011 at 4:45 PM
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Glad to see you writing again. Dont have time to give full read right, but have some thoughts on 1st parag. Will come back for re-read and send email.And thanks for your last opinion--really helped.
posted by
jfm32
on February 22, 2011 at 8:25 PM
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Quite promising Calia :-) Can't wait for more xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 22, 2011 at 8:19 PM
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Quite promising Calia :-) Can't wait for more xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 22, 2011 at 8:19 PM
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I find the characters here to be intriguing.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 22, 2011 at 7:24 PM
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