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One thing that is for certain is that death does not discriminate.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 7, 2011 at 4:20 PM
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Sinome, this reminds me of a young Pharaoh seemingly
with his known world in his hands, and yet, as you vividly show us, the sand he dances on now, will sometime soon cover him in burial...it really emphasizes the vanity (emptiness) of life.
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posted by
Rumor
on February 7, 2011 at 11:41 AM
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This has far reaching implications Simone, perhaps it is a case of getting older and wiser, but does it ever happen?
posted by
C_C_T
on February 7, 2011 at 10:48 AM
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This is beautifully done, it's rich with compassion and lovely to read xoxox
posted by
lionreign
on February 7, 2011 at 8:11 AM
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Powerful and I can actually envision the 'citadel' or defender - the young man raving and concern from the nurturing of a soul as sweet as yours, Sinome. This touched me. I could see this - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 6, 2011 at 7:45 PM
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Oh powerful stuff.
posted by
Kabu
on February 6, 2011 at 5:17 PM
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