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I thhought I'd read it again :)

posted by Cheerygirl on February 4, 2011 at 3:10 PM | link to this | reply

Raye, I agree with Kabu....
This is much more than "just another rewrite"....an excellent one, and thank you for choosing it....

posted by Rumor on February 3, 2011 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Love it!
Thanks, Ariala!

posted by Raye09 on February 3, 2011 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

That's a very good description of what it is like here for me.
Lovely indeed!

posted by TAPS. on February 3, 2011 at 6:40 AM | link to this | reply

I really liked soaring the skies within, whatever it may be! sam 

posted by sam444 on February 3, 2011 at 3:10 AM | link to this | reply

I love the sense of freedom that this poem possesses.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 2, 2011 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting read :)

posted by Cheerygirl on February 2, 2011 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

You were on a roll then Raye I think all poems could do with a rewrite, but you couldn't alter this much 

posted by C_C_T on February 2, 2011 at 11:36 AM | link to this | reply

NOT JUST ANOTHER REWRITE...A BEAUTIFUL REWRITE.

posted by Kabu on February 2, 2011 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

Love it!

posted by Ariala on February 2, 2011 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you so much, Lionreign! Much appreciated..

posted by Raye09 on February 2, 2011 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

wow, strong and surprising imagery and your diction is a delight, you have used so many words I had almost forgotten and which so often lie unused and you have done so to wonderful effect.

posted by lionreign on February 2, 2011 at 7:39 AM | link to this | reply