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I thhought I'd read it again :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on February 4, 2011 at 3:10 PM
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Raye, I agree with Kabu....
This is much more than "just another rewrite"....an
excellent one, and thank you for choosing it..
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posted by
Rumor
on February 3, 2011 at 10:58 AM
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Re: Love it!
Thanks, Ariala!
posted by
Raye09
on February 3, 2011 at 6:41 AM
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That's a very good description of what it is like here for me.
Lovely indeed!
posted by
TAPS.
on February 3, 2011 at 6:40 AM
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I really liked soaring the skies within, whatever it may be! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 3, 2011 at 3:10 AM
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I love the sense of freedom that this poem possesses.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 2, 2011 at 7:10 PM
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Interesting read :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on February 2, 2011 at 1:38 PM
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You were on a roll then Raye I think all poems could do with a rewrite, but you couldn't alter this much
posted by
C_C_T
on February 2, 2011 at 11:36 AM
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NOT JUST ANOTHER REWRITE...A BEAUTIFUL REWRITE.
posted by
Kabu
on February 2, 2011 at 10:46 AM
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Love it!
posted by
Ariala
on February 2, 2011 at 10:07 AM
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Re:
Thank you so much, Lionreign! Much appreciated..
posted by
Raye09
on February 2, 2011 at 8:02 AM
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wow, strong and surprising imagery and your diction is a delight, you have used so many words I had almost forgotten and which so often lie unused and you have done so to wonderful effect.
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2011 at 7:39 AM
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