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Beautiful Raye... loves desire pours out of your poem.
posted by
yellowrose55
on January 23, 2011 at 4:22 PM
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Re: How truly and deeply all of us at times have longed for that heat
Thanks bunches, Dear Sunnybeach!
posted by
Raye09
on January 19, 2011 at 8:42 PM
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Thank you so much, Dear WileyFriend..
posted by
Raye09
on January 19, 2011 at 8:42 PM
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How truly and deeply all of us at times have longed for that heat
Nice work, dear Katray! Looking forward to the old stuff and new stuff alike.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on January 19, 2011 at 4:45 PM
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Raye09
Anything you repost is always new again, you're the greatest luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 19, 2011 at 2:29 PM
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Re: Raye, a very vivid and firey poem filled with heat that the reader can
So appreciated, Rumor; Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on January 19, 2011 at 10:48 AM
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Thank you, Kent!
posted by
Raye09
on January 19, 2011 at 10:47 AM
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Raye, a very vivid and firey poem filled with heat that the reader can
sense and feel....Thanks for posting it..
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posted by
Rumor
on January 19, 2011 at 10:11 AM
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NEW TO ME AND OTHERS I AM SURE, THANKS FOR SHARING
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 19, 2011 at 10:09 AM
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I really appreciate your comment, Dear Sam!
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Raye09
on January 19, 2011 at 9:27 AM
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I think it is great to go through work and offer up selections! Poems are written to be read again and again! I like how this one ended, it sets up the scream, when is a word that can go anyway the reader would like, but the closing line defines it, too! Nice work! I like the chambers as another word with all encompassing use, too! But the fact that it stayed on key as it were for the was splendid too!! sam
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sam444
on January 19, 2011 at 9:03 AM
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Thank you so much, Lionreign!
posted by
Raye09
on January 19, 2011 at 8:23 AM
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Wow, this is intense and passionate. Very well written.
posted by
lionreign
on January 19, 2011 at 8:10 AM
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Maybe CC, read on, be prepared, lol..Thank you!
posted by
Raye09
on January 19, 2011 at 6:47 AM
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Muchly appreciated, Dear Elyse!
posted by
Raye09
on January 19, 2011 at 6:46 AM
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Thank you, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Raye09
on January 19, 2011 at 6:11 AM
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Re: looking forward to more as you tweak and edit...and I love surprises.
Thank you so much, Dear Kabu and good to know..:)
posted by
Raye09
on January 19, 2011 at 6:11 AM
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yes go for it Raye better to write or rewrite anything to get perfection not going to singe the screen are you
posted by
C_C_T
on January 19, 2011 at 5:23 AM
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This is Beautiful ~ I can feel and see the lunar danse ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 18, 2011 at 9:58 PM
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I can so relate to the moment possessed by the madness of writing poetry..Excellent poem Raye.
posted by
shobana
on January 18, 2011 at 9:32 PM
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looking forward to more as you tweak and edit...and I love surprises.
posted by
Kabu
on January 18, 2011 at 8:05 PM
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Nice to hear, FSI! Thank you..
posted by
Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 7:43 PM
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I love the passion with which this poem was written.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 18, 2011 at 7:12 PM
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