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Sinome
Lovely, sad but with a suggestion of hope of love.

posted by WileyJohn on January 19, 2011 at 2:32 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, so very wistful and sad, but with a an ever so slight glimmer
of hope at the end...excellent imagery.....

posted by Rumor on January 19, 2011 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

ANOTHER GREAT POEM WITH SO MANY GREAT LINES TO REMEMBER, LIKE "STARS HIDE IN THE RAIN" AND CRYING WINDOWS OF AN EMPTY TRAIN. THANKS I LOVE TO READ YOUR POEMS

posted by Riversidepoet on January 19, 2011 at 10:13 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
A picture of unreleaved sadness...

posted by Nautikos on January 19, 2011 at 5:54 AM | link to this | reply

Love the poem Simone .  Poor girl will have a problem finding love, I feel that human nature demands a little extra from a woman. Of course there may be a wandering Saint.                                               

posted by C_C_T on January 19, 2011 at 5:37 AM | link to this | reply

 I must believe in the if only's...I just believe Sinome that joy will come in the morning...no matter.  This poem made me teary ~ so full of heart ~ Elyse oxoxo

posted by elysianfields on January 18, 2011 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and heartbreaking!

God Bless!

posted by dougspoetry on January 18, 2011 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

Sounds like the makings of one rough night.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 18, 2011 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

the rain dried away anew beginning in a life...full of promises here. Love
it and Thank you.

posted by Kabu on January 18, 2011 at 6:37 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem Sinome...much hope it brings.

posted by shobana on January 18, 2011 at 6:32 PM | link to this | reply