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This is so beautifully told Sinome and sometimes I wonder how those intense feelings conveyed to each other just dies..
posted by
shobana
on January 17, 2011 at 3:58 AM
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As always you do such a great job at describing the intense emotions being felt.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 15, 2011 at 6:13 PM
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Lovely poem Simone I just wonder if they would ever have made work again after such turmoil. Perhaps they could could live together in harmony but I think the dream would be gone forever.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 15, 2011 at 10:47 AM
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I like the visual format
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on January 15, 2011 at 8:56 AM
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But neither one told the other and the words were never heard,
they stayed away from each other, thinking their love was dead.
and the world was for this sadder
and a tear from the heavens fell.
SUCH A BEAUTIFUL TRUE POEM, OH, SO MANY WORDS THAT WERE NEVER HEARD, OH IF ONLY THEY HAD BEEN SPOKEN, SO MANY BROKEN HEARTS WOULD NEVER HAVE BEEN.
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 15, 2011 at 8:30 AM
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