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well done as usual and a wonderful epic.
posted by
Kabu
on January 14, 2011 at 9:13 PM
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So many people have found themselves feeling that way.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 14, 2011 at 6:05 PM
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Great poem Simone Wow that took some writing
posted by
C_C_T
on January 14, 2011 at 11:23 AM
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There is only one God. Fantastic poem! Excellent. Well done. :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 14, 2011 at 10:22 AM
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There is only one Fantastic poem! Excellent. Well done. :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 14, 2011 at 10:19 AM
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the power of gods love, very well done
posted by
eburns111
on January 14, 2011 at 9:57 AM
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Martas
Nicely done and very moving for the soul to float on the wings of a butterfly and end up with the rain was genious. Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on January 14, 2011 at 8:45 AM
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Brilliant! Every time I think I have come to know your poetry you raise the bar a little higher and you have surely done so with this one xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on January 14, 2011 at 6:44 AM
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why can't I
Great! You dramatized the whole experience, made it concrete with vivid metaphors. I really liked it a lot!
posted by
2902
on January 14, 2011 at 4:29 AM
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