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Got to give it up to you!!! You made this read very interesting and profound. Like you said it makes me sad to leave but you've already gone. Deepest line off the meter!!!!

posted by Mystereo on December 30, 2010 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting rendition of an emotional path, But if you took the impact of this experience, made it your own compacted into the simple, universal--not from the outside-in, but from the inside out, you might have another possibility. The idea of poetry could be one's own transformation, and bring us into a moment we can't touch for ourselves.
Fot what is poetry, but a moment longed to be wished for.

You have the talent, now let's write!

posted by jfm32 on December 26, 2010 at 1:06 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome poem Christ/mas Blessings

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on December 25, 2010 at 12:31 PM | link to this | reply

Sometimes our own egress is the most difficult part! Merry Christmas! sam 

posted by sam444 on December 25, 2010 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

longsam
A nice read and I have had serious depression in my life so it struck a chord. Do have a MERRY CHRISTMAS & HAPPY NEW YEAR.

posted by WileyJohn on December 24, 2010 at 5:20 PM | link to this | reply

longsam

 TTT Aw love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on December 24, 2010 at 4:51 PM | link to this | reply