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Got to give it up to you!!! You made this read very interesting and profound. Like you said it makes me sad to leave but you've already gone. Deepest line off the meter!!!!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 30, 2010 at 9:10 AM
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Interesting rendition of an emotional path, But if you took the impact of this experience, made it your own compacted into the simple, universal--not from the outside-in, but from the inside out, you might have another possibility. The idea of poetry could be one's own transformation, and bring us into a moment we can't touch for ourselves.
Fot what is poetry, but a moment longed to be wished for.
You have the talent, now let's write!
posted by
jfm32
on December 26, 2010 at 1:06 PM
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Awesome poem Christ/mas Blessings
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on December 25, 2010 at 12:31 PM
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Sometimes our own egress is the most difficult part! Merry Christmas! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 25, 2010 at 11:16 AM
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longsam
A nice read and I have had serious depression in my life so it struck a chord. Do have a
MERRY CHRISTMAS & HAPPY NEW YEAR.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 24, 2010 at 5:20 PM
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longsam
TTT Aw love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on December 24, 2010 at 4:51 PM
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