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all i can say is 'my oh my'.......love it!!!!!

posted by icedlatte on December 4, 2010 at 3:56 AM | link to this | reply

Contest with Myself :)

The second one has possibilities, and sounds very interesting if you work out the start.

 But the first one is OK as well.

Either way you will feel what one flows, and what one is just that bit more difficult for you to write and doesn't quite have you dashiing off line after line; even though you have to rewrite all your drafts anyway ha ha.

posted by Cheerygirl on December 2, 2010 at 4:34 PM | link to this | reply

I liked this one and I read the other one first! WOW! You have me hanging on, this is a good hook! sam 

posted by sam444 on December 2, 2010 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply

You write a captivating and powerful tale there. I hope that you share more of your fiction with us. You have a knack for it, I feel.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on December 1, 2010 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply