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This is one poem that makes the whirlwind spin with the right tempo. Excellent poem.

posted by shobana on December 27, 2010 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

Love it! Love it! Love it!

posted by longsam on December 7, 2010 at 10:49 PM | link to this | reply

Just another visit to an inspiring thought.

posted by mariss9 on December 5, 2010 at 3:50 PM | link to this | reply

How exciting that whirlwind when it happens
even though perhaps but a temporary thing.

posted by TAPS. on December 4, 2010 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

This is a Fantastic write! Blessed Be

posted by Nileangel on December 4, 2010 at 3:50 PM | link to this | reply

This is just lovely mystereo.

posted by shobana on December 1, 2010 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

Mystereo ~ be blessed.  This 'whirls' and simply spins full of bliss - Great write here. Elyse

posted by elysianfields on December 1, 2010 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

Absoultely fine and beautiful.  I am happy for the lucky girl!!!

posted by mariss9 on December 1, 2010 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

Brilliant and innovative images make this a great poem

posted by lionreign on December 1, 2010 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

Fantastic Imagery

posted by dougspoetry on December 1, 2010 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

Mysterio

#, It’s felt love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on November 30, 2010 at 5:38 PM | link to this | reply

YOUR WHIRLWIND
Good imagery. It whips you up with it and moves you along. Good.

posted by Cheerygirl on November 30, 2010 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

This is fantastic! Among the great lines in this wonderful poem I was so taken with this: Words invaded my mind so dearly creating thoughts that couldn’t be spoken. I so know this one! POWERFUL!!! You are so adept at poignant imagery that takes so few lines to create a magnificent scene and the imagery lingers in the reader's mind! Amazing talent! sam 

posted by sam444 on November 30, 2010 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

As long as you spin you will be OK lovely poem.

posted by C_C_T on November 30, 2010 at 2:43 AM | link to this | reply

i would like to be cought in that whirlwind

posted by Tzippy on November 29, 2010 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

What an alliance! I was caught in "Your Whirlwind" too!

posted by shamasehar on November 29, 2010 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply