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This is enchanting - I love the imagery in it
posted by
lionreign
on November 15, 2010 at 7:54 AM
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Lovely!!
posted by
janey_
on November 14, 2010 at 6:41 PM
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Very Nice!
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on November 14, 2010 at 6:11 AM
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i believe you will find a new you and sing that song
posted by
eburns111
on November 13, 2010 at 4:52 PM
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How I would want to grasp the hand that would lead me back into my unaccomplished deeds! Awesome images and verse. Like a leaf floating down in the wind, was graced with that this Autumn. 
posted by
mariss9
on November 13, 2010 at 7:07 AM
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I wish I could too.
posted by
Straightforward
on November 13, 2010 at 6:41 AM
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This was fabulous! a departure of sorts from your usual but so very good it left me speechless.. To sing a song without words... what a concept :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 13, 2010 at 6:12 AM
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Very good John I just wonder if the average reader will know who Neruda is (I take it some kind of deity who had roots) I will look it up later. Otherwise it is quite smooth and interesting .
posted by
C_C_T
on November 12, 2010 at 11:11 PM
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As if a daydream can that be a silent song, I see the Leaves falling from the tree song, great read!
posted by
Mystereo
on November 12, 2010 at 9:19 PM
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Hmmm... well J ~ I think you have written such a poem here - that Neruda would have been peeking at your muse. This is silky smooth ~ and by that last line - 'rich'.
Thank you for your read and your very thoughtful comments. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 12, 2010 at 9:00 PM
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