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Oh ~ 'Could I just go round and criticize everyone?' 'For about a week, I told him. --- so I'm to consider if it be CC or UA within the comments.  This could prove to be interesting - fun and a mystery eh? ~ E.E.

posted by elysianfields on November 13, 2010 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply

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Make way please for another lady, yes she can sit on my lap, we have both got headaches. 

posted by C_C_T on November 13, 2010 at 6:48 AM | link to this | reply

Re: EE.
Uncle Albert mulls over it E.E. I told him he could go through some early poems that I put on once and tidy them up. He gave me a woeful look 'What's it all about,' he asked sadly. 'Could I just go round and criticize everyone?' 'For about a week, I told him.' 

posted by C_C_T on November 13, 2010 at 6:46 AM | link to this | reply

UA --- are you wanting to leave a bit?  possibly to sidle next to an endearing lady you've found?  or is the train, with its wailful whistle that's urging you onward into utopia? I mean oblivion? I read the last poem and re-read...my what scads of imagery I had by first cup of coffee...when I arrive back home near sunset, by then, yes, I may read again - sometimes, UA, you leave me 'speechless' ~ Madam E.E.

posted by elysianfields on November 12, 2010 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

Perhaps they will make room! But I want to get on the train to oblivion myself! It sounds like a rail I would be enlightened with as well! I love this poem! It has a lot of fiber to it and I think it can be far reaching imagery for the reader, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on November 12, 2010 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply