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I like the title ~ and the whole poem just moves right along ~ "as the sun goes off..." this is wonderful - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 8, 2010 at 9:30 PM
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Sinome
I always am able to wind down by reading your lovely writing before going to sleep luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 8, 2010 at 8:30 PM
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perfect ending to a wonderful day, drifting into soft dreams, great poem
posted by
Tzippy
on November 8, 2010 at 8:02 PM
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I've fallen asleep that way too.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 8, 2010 at 7:25 PM
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SometimesI think of your verses as I am drifting off to sleep and....
I have drifted
posted by
Kabu
on November 8, 2010 at 5:56 PM
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Out of sight and out of mind!!! What more could be said? Awesome! Oh my God!!
posted by
Mystereo
on November 8, 2010 at 2:31 PM
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Your imagery is always so compelling,
it is easy to go where you would take us.
posted by
Randir
on November 8, 2010 at 1:39 PM
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Simone
Wonderful read as the light of your soul brightened my heart. Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on November 8, 2010 at 9:03 AM
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peaceful words
posted by
Lanetay
on November 8, 2010 at 8:54 AM
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This is enchanting... I can almost feel the scene and drift into slumber
posted by
lionreign
on November 8, 2010 at 7:54 AM
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Goodness me Simone this was so soflly worded it made me feel sleepy lovely poem
posted by
C_C_T
on November 8, 2010 at 12:23 AM
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Sinome
Û Aah things that go bright in the night love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 7, 2010 at 9:29 PM
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