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Its cold outside...

Fabulous poem. I really liked it.

posted by Cheerygirl on November 5, 2010 at 5:52 PM | link to this | reply

Wow, I read this and then watched the North wind blow through the leaves outside....it all seemed so much more beautiful than it did before xoxoxox

posted by lionreign on November 5, 2010 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply

Your make the remote come to us intimately

Very lovely!

 

posted by Randir on November 5, 2010 at 12:54 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Beautifully reflective...

posted by Nautikos on November 4, 2010 at 7:58 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
You are the gteatest lover the ocean has ever had, you are a joy to read luv.

posted by WileyJohn on November 4, 2010 at 7:08 PM | link to this | reply

You have captured this fleeting transition so beautifully.  Something about the stars at this time of year is just so enchanting.  

posted by calia14 on November 4, 2010 at 5:49 PM | link to this | reply

I would love the answers to those questions.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 4, 2010 at 5:37 PM | link to this | reply

Funny how when it is warm the sea beckons me to come and play and when the
weather turns cold...the water too just looks cold. Our leaves too are just dry crunchy patches...very sad.

posted by Kabu on November 4, 2010 at 3:21 PM | link to this | reply

It's cold outside
Spectacular, rich imagery.

posted by 2Philomena on November 4, 2010 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Ö These questions answered can warm people love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on November 4, 2010 at 9:33 AM | link to this | reply

So fitting and lovely for this Autumn, may more illumination be on this country and world. It is beautiful at night when the stars are clear....

posted by mariss9 on November 4, 2010 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

nice Simone a bit chilly, but that's good. 

posted by C_C_T on November 4, 2010 at 12:35 AM | link to this | reply

Loved this poem and its imagery Sinome. Thank you for the visit.

posted by shobana on November 4, 2010 at 12:01 AM | link to this | reply

Nice one Sinome.. it's sounds as if the ocean whispers at your window.

posted by yellowrose55 on November 3, 2010 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply