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Why was it the last time you was together?
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 5, 2010 at 4:44 PM
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full and rewarding I feel your friendship would be ~ this is very touching, Mystereo ~ written with intent and meaning. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 5, 2010 at 1:10 PM
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Wonderful, I love both the form and content of this poem
posted by
lionreign
on November 5, 2010 at 8:54 AM
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Can see the longing and desire in the poem.
posted by
Straightforward
on November 5, 2010 at 4:15 AM
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Fantastic poem! I love how it is most ingenuous! KUDOS all the day long on this one! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 4, 2010 at 10:05 PM
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GROWING
Great poem. I really like it. Well done.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 4, 2010 at 5:05 PM
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The unbalance of people's ways definitely plays a part in what succeeds or fails in love relationships.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 4, 2010 at 4:57 PM
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Im enjoying your poems--mostly because they're well-written, and I like the feel of indirection through direction (or visa versa)--that you don't overspeak the idea of your thought, and that you let them breath.This might be why I don't undertand why you have a period (.) after each line, for if thought is the innerspaak of language, doesn't it contain it's own unspoken puctuation. Consider, that if you deleted all the periods, the poem would still read the same. So why are thet there?
Just a thought.
posted by
jfm32
on November 4, 2010 at 12:34 PM
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Love can grow or go away into something else...it truly does depend of both parties. Great!!
posted by
mariss9
on November 4, 2010 at 12:11 PM
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Ö a friend is fuel love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 4, 2010 at 9:38 AM
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What can one do but wait. Nicely written emotionally so it would suggest.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 4, 2010 at 12:43 AM
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I absolutely loved this mystereo..Read it many times over. Thanks so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on November 3, 2010 at 7:38 PM
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Wonderful expression of heart!
posted by
Kate07
on November 3, 2010 at 7:31 PM
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GROWING
Written o very well, your poem slowed so perfectly..I enjoyed it very much,
posted by
MsJudy
on November 3, 2010 at 6:40 PM
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