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It is a fantastic poem Sinome and very true to words. I loved the whole scenario. Thank you so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on October 28, 2010 at 4:28 PM
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Sinome ~ I can't recall reading this --- I don't think ~ this is so sensual --- actually touches every sense while I read. Beautiful --- and deep - profound in it's wise words~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 28, 2010 at 11:30 AM
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Wow, I am robbed of words by this poem - it's absolutely stunning sweetie! xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on October 28, 2010 at 4:02 AM
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Well It was a lovely piece of writing Simone thank you for letting us into your thoughts, it felt just as one would expect like a restless experience that had no immediate answer. I expect most would have hit the bottle or taken a pill but you wrote it as you felt and hopefully found a kind of peace.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 28, 2010 at 12:23 AM
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Sinome
Y It feels both good and disturbing. That makes a good poem love. BC-A, Bill’s RTTst
posted by
BC-A
on October 27, 2010 at 9:35 PM
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That is one powerful storm!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 27, 2010 at 7:27 PM
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I DON'T RECALL THIS AND IF I HAD I AM GLAD TO READ IT AGAIN
IF I HAD READ THIS YEARS AGO I WOULD HAVE LEFT MY OLD LIFE BEHIND THEN.
It has wonderful thoughts expressed brilliantly ......how often we don't take charge of our life for long enough to turn it away fromunhappiness topeace and love. Thank you, this is beautiful.
posted by
Kabu
on October 27, 2010 at 7:17 PM
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with all the commotion that life brings our way ,its often not seen, the beauty of mother nature and the calmness it brings, if we would just keep our hands out of it
posted by
eburns111
on October 27, 2010 at 7:08 PM
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Marta
If you did I didn't read it then. I love it now. You have such a fertile mind. I love your work. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on October 27, 2010 at 6:32 PM
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