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Re: Yes, It is frightening!
That is the way it is sometimes. No, the escape is never quick and sometimes never will leave you alone. Thanks for reading and commenting. love and joy, Kay
posted by
KayJoy
on October 26, 2010 at 11:11 AM
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Frightening --- so very very sad. I pray the escape was quick in flight. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 26, 2010 at 10:35 AM
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Re: Yes, so many times it is.
I've watched it in both my girls' marriages, which did not last. Read my other comment too! Thanks for reading it. I just started this poem with three words, the first three, and I did not know what I was going to write, or where it was going. So strange! - Kay
posted by
KayJoy
on October 25, 2010 at 10:05 PM
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Re: csherloc, it isn't my story, but it is one that happens often, also
It conveys another idea. Anyone can be allured into something my the craftiness of the devil, and then we find out it is too late. Put your spiritual eyes on and read it again. Thanks for your comment and your insight too! love and joy, Kay
posted by
KayJoy
on October 25, 2010 at 10:02 PM
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a vow not real i hope
posted by
eburns111
on October 25, 2010 at 9:20 PM
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Very sad outcome. Sounds like a man who say's " I will do what I want to do and I don't give a damn". I hope you got over this, or are in the process of doing so.
posted by
csherloc
on October 25, 2010 at 7:07 PM
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Unexpected Guest
A vivid picture of an unhappy marriage.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 25, 2010 at 2:52 PM
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