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Re: CORNCRAKE
Thank you Wiley I wondered what it reminded me of. Happy days I expect.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:53 AM
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Thank you Lion it was always said that I didn't have any when I took the guard squad the wrong way on parade. Only conscripts of course.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:50 AM
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Re: SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING I WOULD DO...BUILD A DREAM AROUND
Yes it is surprising what one does when one is feeling slightly bored Kabu have some popcorn.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:47 AM
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Thank you sweetie, I don't think I want to hear that song too many times, perhaps you could just hum it softly,
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:40 AM
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Right FS. You mustn't take your eye off the ball.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:28 AM
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Thank you thank goodness I've still got a few on disks from the crazy days.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:27 AM
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Re: C.C. ....
Something like that Rumor I don't like getting wet, and I'm still damp from watching your seaside romp.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:24 AM
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Re: Hypothethical situation
I guess so Ms SF but that how one lives a lot of the time.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:21 AM
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Re: CC
Yes I would be thinking of you Femia could you pay darling
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:19 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
It the way it hits the window Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:16 AM
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Bring on the dolls E.E. let them do the dancing.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:15 AM
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Thank you csherloc keep looking
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 8:14 AM
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This is a very clever poem, I like your thought patterns here
posted by
lionreign
on October 20, 2010 at 7:40 AM
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Brought the song "car wash" to mind CC. Great poem.
posted by
shobana
on October 19, 2010 at 8:52 PM
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CORNCRAKE
That was a cool drive through that car wash with you, and great poetry focussed on that l'il dashboard icon.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 19, 2010 at 7:41 PM
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Such deep thoughts during the process...As you can imagine the title caught my eye!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 19, 2010 at 4:15 PM
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I really liked the concluding stanza! It is one to ponder because it really struck a chord, a good one! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 19, 2010 at 3:36 PM
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SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING I WOULD DO...BUILD A DREAM AROUND
SOMETHING WHILE I WENT THROUGH THE CAR WASH...OR WASHED THE DISHES OR THE BATHROOM. I LOVE ANTIQUES AND OFTEN MAKE UPSTORIES ABOUT SOMETHINGS PREVIOUS HOME.
posted by
Kabu
on October 19, 2010 at 11:53 AM
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C.C. ....
the carnival can indeed be a magical place where anything can happen...who is the real statue here? :
I stood and became a statue in the midst of reality. Reality can turn us to stone.
Or was it all just a daydream as you went through the car wash (your car, that is..:).
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posted by
Rumor
on October 19, 2010 at 10:39 AM
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Hypothethical situation
posted by
Straightforward
on October 19, 2010 at 8:55 AM
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CC
To be the one who sits on your dash board of life is a pleasure if the car belongs to Mr. mb.
To wait in anticipation of ones thoughts is knowing you care while time passes by in your car wash. Sugar Sweet, Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on October 19, 2010 at 8:53 AM
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CORNCAKE
¬ A cute way to pass time sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 19, 2010 at 8:41 AM
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CC ~ ah but I like the way you write. This is with colors so soft and oily --- oozing ~ swirling and well, this is Art. EE
posted by
elysianfields
on October 19, 2010 at 6:49 AM
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If only my thoughts could be swirled and washed. I would look through a clear screen. I am in total agreement with you, C.C.
posted by
csherloc
on October 19, 2010 at 3:53 AM
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