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Sinome
Ah but darlin' you are your own special light, lives right there in your beautiful soul

posted by WileyJohn on October 18, 2010 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

ZJ Sunlight at sunrise and sunset, that we call the magic hours, make good inspiration for poetry love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on October 18, 2010 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

Your imagery is superb here, sweetie, everything is so visual until the wish at the end which is so much more poignant for the change. xoxoxox

posted by lionreign on October 18, 2010 at 7:17 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful sunset a gift for aching hearts and more Sinome, lovely poem and thanks for the visit.

posted by shobana on October 17, 2010 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply

a bruised heart the same colour of the dusk....I like this darling....
of course.

posted by Kabu on October 17, 2010 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

So much while looking at a beautiful scene.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 17, 2010 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Beautiful! It captures the mood of evening and autumn...

posted by Nautikos on October 17, 2010 at 5:59 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and captivating.

posted by csherloc on October 17, 2010 at 1:56 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and captivating.

posted by csherloc on October 17, 2010 at 1:56 PM | link to this | reply

Mauve sunset
Moving.

posted by Cheerygirl on October 17, 2010 at 12:35 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

. Light’s beautiful. I worked the sunlight, shining through the door curtain this morning into my story love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on October 17, 2010 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

This must be a good poem Simone because it makes me feel sad, but then you always tear little strips off of yourself and I am sure you could still glow with that inner light if you wished. 

posted by C_C_T on October 17, 2010 at 12:42 AM | link to this | reply