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Amazing read you touch my heart the way you expressed yourself. Great!!

posted by Mystereo on October 7, 2010 at 6:05 PM | link to this | reply

This poem proves that the right words build bonds love.

posted by BC-A on September 4, 2010 at 12:07 AM | link to this | reply

One Day
To let one give all they have is sometimes the pitfall of wanting Love it usually harder to achieve. To be and Let them see who your are is what they should Let you be to you..A giver of yourself. Nice write Fema

posted by fememefeme on September 3, 2010 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

posted by lovelyladymonk on September 3, 2010 at 7:14 AM | link to this | reply

posted by lovelyladymonk on September 3, 2010 at 7:14 AM | link to this | reply

difficult to make one react in the way you want,  good poem

posted by spiderfly on September 3, 2010 at 2:45 AM | link to this | reply