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Perfumed Blossoms
Beautifully expressed and the facts easily digested.

posted by csherloc on September 2, 2010 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: comment 2902, Thanks, but I'm not sure...
It would work, but doesn't quite convey the message.  I've got to think about it. You are good to share your ideas. I thank you for that. love and joy, Kay 

posted by KayJoy on September 2, 2010 at 5:39 AM | link to this | reply

blossoms
Lovely poem and comparison, though I think the last line might need some work. When I got there I wanted to say something more like "The best of all His healing crafts", or something like that.  Just an idea, I'm sure you must have a better, the rest is so fine!   

posted by 2902 on September 2, 2010 at 1:46 AM | link to this | reply