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Perfumed Blossoms
Beautifully expressed and the facts easily digested.
posted by
csherloc
on September 2, 2010 at 6:15 AM
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Re: comment 2902, Thanks, but I'm not sure...
It would work, but doesn't quite convey the message. I've got to think about it. You are good to share your ideas. I thank you for that. love and joy, Kay
posted by
KayJoy
on September 2, 2010 at 5:39 AM
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blossoms
Lovely poem and comparison, though I think the last line might need some work. When I got there I wanted to say something more like "The best of all His healing crafts", or something like that. Just an idea, I'm sure you must have a better, the rest is so fine!
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on September 2, 2010 at 1:46 AM
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