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B Quite a surrealistic way to understand your surroundings. Imaginative. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on September 1, 2010 at 6:08 PM
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Great imagery; and exploring indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 31, 2010 at 8:23 PM
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Life is very much like a sea, I feel.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 31, 2010 at 8:10 PM
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Water, floating, swimming, watching, ushers in peace for me!
I really enjoyed this poem. I totally envisioned myself two inches below the surface of the water at the deep end of the pool, relaxed and taking it all it!
posted by
janey_
on August 31, 2010 at 1:43 PM
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Calia
I remember when young how I floated above all to view others about me and now I just float on my two feet on the ground as I walk about. Nicely done. Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on August 31, 2010 at 12:28 PM
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