Go to rain or shine,i want to smile.
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I liked the way this was strung together. Good.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 2, 2010 at 4:06 PM
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As life moves on we all have face this same block or pot holes you learn!
Great read!!!
posted by
Mystereo
on October 8, 2010 at 2:49 PM
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yes you are right.life is all about struggling.one after another.
many thanks for the visit
posted by
ain_natasha
on September 22, 2010 at 6:00 AM
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It does pose a real difficult when one does not know when to make their own egress! Fine imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 23, 2010 at 2:47 PM
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Re: steamfly
many thanks!
posted by
ain_natasha
on August 22, 2010 at 8:13 AM
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Re: in simple words, this poem's conveying the entire dilemma....
yes it is.thanks for the visit :)
posted by
ain_natasha
on August 22, 2010 at 8:13 AM
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Yes, this is something I can relate to! Very heartfelt poem!
posted by
steamfly
on August 22, 2010 at 4:38 AM
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in simple words, this poem's conveying the entire dilemma....
posted by
Straightforward
on August 21, 2010 at 10:30 PM
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