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Strong stuff, Kabu. The wonderful but terrifying call of the wild.

posted by adnohr on August 21, 2010 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

Nature does have a very cruel element to it at times. Thankfully the great outweights the cruel.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 21, 2010 at 5:31 PM | link to this | reply

A powerful reminder/prayer; reality of Nature's balance..
Haunting excellence, Dear Kabu!    

posted by Katray2 on August 21, 2010 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply

Don't get running around in the moon light Kabu. Very nice writing indeed. 

posted by C_C_T on August 21, 2010 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

This is so powerful! Thanks very much for your note. Am catching up with your posts now!

posted by Nita09 on August 21, 2010 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply

For "first thoughts", this is a terrific poem, Kabu. Really captures the feel of the wild.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on August 21, 2010 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu, there's nothing like the howl of a wolf..its both beautiful and
somewhat frightening at the same time (although wolves are so sorely misunderstood)...

posted by Rumor on August 21, 2010 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

The wolves can be strange creatures, I never put it together what they might be howling about!  Not a good area to take a midnight hike, for sure.  I've heard the eerie howling of the coyotes before, but sort of liked it.  You have a gift as a story-teller. 

posted by mariss9 on August 21, 2010 at 6:34 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu
Marvellous! I love it! And I love hearing the wolves howl...

posted by Nautikos on August 21, 2010 at 6:00 AM | link to this | reply

K

j I didn’t know that wolves liked sweet air love.  BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on August 21, 2010 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful way to bring nature's fang and claw to downtown Blogit!
I have this creepy little chill up the old background right now.  Write on!

posted by Pat_B on August 21, 2010 at 5:12 AM | link to this | reply

First draft of some thoughts ...
I thought your poem was great..

posted by MsJudy on August 21, 2010 at 12:50 AM | link to this | reply

eerie but beautifully composes...could hear the wolves howling yonder

posted by icedlatte on August 20, 2010 at 11:00 PM | link to this | reply

If this is a first draft I can not wait to see the finished product :-)  xoxoxo  Excellent! 

posted by Sinome on August 20, 2010 at 10:21 PM | link to this | reply

This leaves me shivering Grandmummy.  I LOVE it!!!

posted by lovelyladymonk on August 20, 2010 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply