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I just got through reading your other poem, and admire this one for the same reasons! The desperate situation
and your concern come through very vividly. It's a poem to re-read and take seriously. I'll be thinking of you.
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2902
on August 8, 2010 at 12:34 PM
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I don't know where you are but it seems that there is not much shade. A good job there is water this poem does emphasize the heat and the discomfort it brings.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2010 at 12:25 PM
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