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Very deep and creative read!! This is very good and written!
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Mystereo
on October 9, 2010 at 4:14 PM
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prayer
Oops - make that "live" not "living".
posted by
2902
on August 8, 2010 at 1:09 PM
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prayer
Great - an improvement on the original! One suggestion: switching the order of "living" and "freely" in the third line from the end might sound even better.
posted by
2902
on August 8, 2010 at 1:07 PM
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