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The speaker comes across as being so sympathetic in this. I hope that everything can be worked out.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 23, 2010 at 8:09 PM
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Yes I think you will get away with it a nice explanatory poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 23, 2010 at 10:19 AM
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beautiful piece. sometimes people don't see, and it takes a walk away to get them to see. but sometimes the more you stick by that person and show them how to love they will eventually see, if you can stand the frustrations.
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Asset2U
on July 23, 2010 at 8:10 AM
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can you be loved
I hear you! Boy do I hear you! Wonderful economy of means and more than a hint of how one deals with possible disappointment! I'm just getting over writing "Mary",a somewhat similar poem about a week ago.
posted by
2902
on July 23, 2010 at 6:26 AM
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´ Think of your feelings of love. And maybe it will click. The bitterness belongs in a poem. And it works in this one. Excellent! BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on July 23, 2010 at 6:09 AM
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