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Very good, Vicky!
 

posted by Katray2 on July 14, 2010 at 5:56 PM | link to this | reply

over the edge, very nice, very deep

posted by Tzippy on July 14, 2010 at 5:38 PM | link to this | reply

Gorgeous!
I loved this one

posted by lionreign on July 13, 2010 at 6:28 AM | link to this | reply

Y That’s a nice happening love. BC-A, Bill’s  RJLst

posted by BC-A on July 12, 2010 at 11:50 PM | link to this | reply

So well said...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on July 12, 2010 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

Like it!

posted by janey_ on July 12, 2010 at 6:58 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful!

posted by jollyjeff on July 12, 2010 at 2:30 PM | link to this | reply

Ah! These haikus are good when they mean something as well as being beautiful. Yours does both.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on July 12, 2010 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent!

posted by Nita09 on July 12, 2010 at 9:12 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful!  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on July 11, 2010 at 5:14 PM | link to this | reply

Touch is so important to a relationship.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 11, 2010 at 10:19 AM | link to this | reply

I had the distinct feeling this was written on my patio! lol It is wonderful imagery! KUDOS!!! sam

posted by sam444 on July 11, 2010 at 3:12 AM | link to this | reply

How sensuously gorgeous yellowrose. Well done.

posted by shobana on July 11, 2010 at 2:36 AM | link to this | reply

tellowrose
Just so delightful, yellowrose. You even write Haikus? I didn't know.

posted by anib on July 11, 2010 at 12:36 AM | link to this | reply