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TIMMY, very gripping and I did see the end coming ...
(wonder of wonders...:) ......

posted by Rumor on July 15, 2010 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply

What an explosive ending! I did not see it coming! KUDOS!!! sam

posted by sam444 on July 11, 2010 at 12:59 AM | link to this | reply

TT
Well done, and I'm glad this is fiction; for if it were 'real'...

posted by Nautikos on July 10, 2010 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, that is the million dollar question....and of course, the next one, do
you want to become one? If not, what do you wanna do not to become one?

posted by Straightforward on July 10, 2010 at 2:23 AM | link to this | reply

This is so real that I want to shake you and scream that life is too
precious to throw away like this, that no lover is worth this...she will go on and enjoy all she can from life, your family will suffer forever; it will break them apart. That's how well written this little piece is.

posted by Kabu on July 9, 2010 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

The narrator is in such a precarious position. One wrong move and boom, life spirals out of control...You have a knack for presenting inner turmoil.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 9, 2010 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply