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great.goood.loved it
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on July 8, 2010 at 9:53 PM
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Clever
the last two lines are genius, what a brilliant way to finish the poem, a trace of enigma in the number of interpretations that can be put on those lines
posted by
lionreign
on July 8, 2010 at 8:05 AM
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Hi Sir I go along with your first lines, but I can't twist my mind around what you mean by the last two, I would love to hear a lucid explanation as I know you will be able to supply one. I wouldn't have troubled you if you had been a pensioner.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 8, 2010 at 12:36 AM
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So interesting and twisty :)
posted by
calia14
on July 7, 2010 at 7:27 PM
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Intrguing thought here John. Thanks for the visit and I am from the boonies and talk like this still..
Well the last sentence is a portrait unfinished of a garden without the butterfly.
posted by
shobana
on July 7, 2010 at 7:01 PM
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Brilliantly expressed my friend... succinct and meaningful. Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on July 7, 2010 at 6:54 PM
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