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They're figuring out the problem, I feel. Now the question is what are they going to do about it?
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 29, 2010 at 5:57 PM
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Excellent writing, Dear Kabu..the suspense builds nicely..
posted by
Katray2
on June 29, 2010 at 4:51 PM
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This story is coming along wonderfully Kabu. I just hope you are ok though. Love you.
posted by
shobana
on June 29, 2010 at 3:50 PM
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OK, I'm ready for the next part.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 29, 2010 at 2:17 PM
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Oooh... creepy.
I had a haunt in my house once... maybe twice. Can't wait for the next installment.
posted by
Pat_B
on June 29, 2010 at 9:41 AM
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posted by
lovelyladymonk
on June 29, 2010 at 9:35 AM
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Kabu
So very beautiful and it smells so tempting ... I promise to read it from the start. BTW your "I belive ...." comment inspired me to give a post on all who with such great hearts commented to my write. So I gave a full bog as answer in
Inspired by Shobana, Shamasehar, Sinome and Kabu
posted by
anib
on June 29, 2010 at 8:01 AM
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Kabu, you certainly got my attention...:)
and you've made it a real cliffhanger, too (right up my alley..
..)..
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posted by
Rumor
on June 29, 2010 at 7:54 AM
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gripping!
And it just goes to show that having mirrors all over the place isn't a good thing
posted by
lionreign
on June 29, 2010 at 6:56 AM
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Kabu
Just catching up here - and even though it's a bright, warm morning, there's a cold shiver running down my spine...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 29, 2010 at 5:37 AM
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Kabu
Y Good suspenseful stuff love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 28, 2010 at 11:14 PM
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I bet you wouldn't write this if you were sleeping alone Kabu, quite imaginative though, keep the light on
posted by
C_C_T
on June 28, 2010 at 11:10 PM
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I already have been forming one possible theory. Maybe others will occur. His relatives were ungrateful even if he did leave them before. I would wonder about that..... but then when a person is alone a lot, they can become a target for predators who watch them.
posted by
mariss9
on June 28, 2010 at 9:33 PM
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My goodness I can't go away and leave you for any length of time you get into trouble.... Love these.
posted by
Justi
on June 28, 2010 at 9:16 PM
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I will never see a mirror the same way again
posted by
Lanetay
on June 28, 2010 at 8:27 PM
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Kabuiepie-;)
I can't wait for it all to come together love, I'm hangin' in to read what's up with that creepy mirror. Good writing, a cliff hanger
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 28, 2010 at 7:14 PM
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