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Franchise
HI Shobana, I don't think that I am a poet that makes me feel a bit funny. Probably you would make a good politician, but you want to become a poetess, well that's life. I want to be Casanova, but something tells me that I can only act that part in dreams, thank goodness, I'm hoping that you won't read back on this, I'm warming up for the next poem sleepily.    

posted by C_C_T on June 28, 2010 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply

Hi CC, the ever enlightening poet has found a great franchise and I can just tell the seriousness of it by the meting out the miles with a toothbrushes. Very nice poem CC, in a way romantic and also fun with a seriousness attached to it as well.

Thank you for the visit and really CC, I don't like the thought of you being sad. Good advise though and I did smile at the end of the poem.

posted by shobana on June 28, 2010 at 3:46 AM | link to this | reply

CORNCAKE

m] You can always meet faith sir BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on June 28, 2010 at 3:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I experience that every time I travel...
Thank you ash, truer words never spoken

posted by C_C_T on June 27, 2010 at 11:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I should have waited, for the furthest peach forme was way across the other
Are you trying to spoil my business Kabu, I can't afford to think happy, don't bite that peach too hard. 

posted by C_C_T on June 27, 2010 at 11:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCRAKE
They don't come along like this very often Wiley, I would recruit you, but there is such a high upfront charge. 

posted by C_C_T on June 27, 2010 at 11:51 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Serious Franchise
Hi fem you would be better off buying another snow cone, I'm trying to find a way to make thinner ice, but not for walking on, love to hear from you 

posted by C_C_T on June 27, 2010 at 11:48 PM | link to this | reply

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Taps you've hit me on the head with my conscience. I wasn't going to pick my blaccurrants and gooseberries because I can see there is a good crop of greengages to freeze. Now I shall have to pick those wretched little things and stick them by the gate as free samples

posted by C_C_T on June 27, 2010 at 11:44 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Franchise
Glad you liked it LB hope you feel better

posted by C_C_T on June 27, 2010 at 11:39 PM | link to this | reply

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thankyou for calling FS always remember the peach

posted by C_C_T on June 27, 2010 at 11:38 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Simone, one has to approach serious advice in a lighthearted manner sometimes

posted by C_C_T on June 27, 2010 at 11:37 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent work!  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on June 27, 2010 at 5:21 PM | link to this | reply

You hit the nail on the head with the difficulties of business and life in general, I feel.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 27, 2010 at 4:17 PM | link to this | reply

Franchise
Wonderfully written Corncrake! I really enjoyed it../LB

posted by MsJudy on June 27, 2010 at 3:32 PM | link to this | reply

I think you could sell anything. 

posted by TAPS. on June 27, 2010 at 12:11 PM | link to this | reply

Serious Franchise
Are you sell? I'm Buying the affection of your great writing in the emotions of Love and sharing even a tooth brush..So True to be on the market of selling life itself with another is wonderful. Blessing Mr. MB Fema..Hope you have had your snow cone by now.Yummy!

posted by fememefeme on June 27, 2010 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply

CORNCRAKE
You've a great business head hanging on to that franchise like that and being so joyfully poetic aboutg it all

posted by WileyJohn on June 27, 2010 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

I experience that every time I travel...
a new world awaits us wherever we go, we just have to be ready to receive it..well-said! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on June 27, 2010 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

I should have waited, for the furthest peach forme was way across the other
side of the World and until I reached up and up and up...my spirit was never really free.

posted by Kabu on June 27, 2010 at 8:50 AM | link to this | reply