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CI guess that brainstorming can occur between the lines love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on June 6, 2010 at 6:00 AM | link to this | reply

Sometimes what we write can be misconstrued.... but it is what sits between the lines that can be the most hurtful to a reader who relates to your leading lines, how can we explain what we have not written.

posted by spiderfly on June 5, 2010 at 3:03 PM | link to this | reply

I don't think you could hurt anyone's feelings Fem. Now I have just rubbed out what said because it was cheeky, so you see it works for all of us to some degree. Your poetry  is increasing in power and I suppose we do have to put a censor on ourselves at times, as long as it doesn't hurt anyone. Warning my next two poems are cheeky.  MB

posted by C_C_T on June 5, 2010 at 11:40 AM | link to this | reply