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Excellently written yellowrose - loved the whole imagery. Thanks so much for stopping by.

posted by shobana on May 23, 2010 at 5:22 AM | link to this | reply

yellowrose
This is nothing short of a classic. Believe me, the depth, the cadence, the imagery, the alliteration, and the sense of the poem in pithy lines all makes it BRILLIANT. Exceptionally well done, yellowrose.

posted by anib on May 22, 2010 at 11:43 PM | link to this | reply

Floating
Well it's different Vicky and interesting, thank you for your visit 

posted by C_C_T on May 22, 2010 at 11:35 PM | link to this | reply

there is a lot going on in your mind

posted by Lanetay on May 22, 2010 at 10:55 PM | link to this | reply

Very raw emotions in this great poem Vicki... one is never alone if one has faith... that lacing of light might be what keeps one from sinking into the darkness of the deep... hold on to it sweetie... xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on May 22, 2010 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

laced with light..... I love that

You are never alone.....but sometimes we think we are

this is a great poem , touching and laced with love, deep as the ocean and a pleasure to read.

posted by Tzippy on May 22, 2010 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

That some fine imagery and poignant realization! But hoping someone will pass by may be wishful thinking and the reason the bed is as it is! Nice imagery nonetheless! sam

posted by sam444 on May 22, 2010 at 5:58 PM | link to this | reply