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Why do you make us wait so long between installments?! lol Just Jiving! I am ready for more, though! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 25, 2010 at 4:26 PM
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This story is really exciting, Ian !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 23, 2010 at 9:51 AM
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You are doing a fine job of keeping it interesting! Everything seems to be very calculated! I can't wait 'til Baer gets it! lol sam
posted by
sam444
on May 22, 2010 at 1:47 PM
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The battle's going realistically. Tension was building...
and then you said the guy had a "fowl" mouth. fowl = chicken I couldn't help visualizing a soldier with a chicken beak. (I know that's silly... I can't help it. I was an English major.)
posted by
Pat_B
on May 22, 2010 at 5:22 AM
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