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Thanks guys I appreciate the comments a whole lot. I am going to start posting chapter three tomorrow.
posted by
FrannieF30
on May 19, 2010 at 5:11 PM
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so nice, i didnt want it to end!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 19, 2010 at 3:18 PM
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I like how you handle dialogue! And the descriptions of the kisses and their impact was very well done too, it gave it a very realistic feel! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 19, 2010 at 2:36 PM
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