Comments on Chapter two First Date pages 7-11

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Thanks guys I appreciate the comments a whole lot. I am going to start posting chapter three tomorrow.

posted by FrannieF30 on May 19, 2010 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply

so nice, i  didnt want it to end!

posted by dsm_tchr on May 19, 2010 at 3:18 PM | link to this | reply

I like how you handle dialogue! And the descriptions of the kisses and their impact was very well done too, it gave it a very realistic feel! sam

posted by sam444 on May 19, 2010 at 2:36 PM | link to this | reply