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Nautikos
Ominous is also a good word. I think the most sinister part of the entire story is that everything was so sneaking and subtle. Even when things were blatantly wrong, it was all subdued, as is often the case in abusive situations. The sisters and I are still debriefing, all of these years later. Since we rarely talked openly about it while at home, we are nowadays being validated by each other. We all saw and felt the same things...that what happened there was wrong, that there was something within the home that was very...'off'.

posted by Darson on May 11, 2010 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

FSI
Yes, I think stunned was the right word. I think he got my meaning, but didn't want to. That's why he played the silliness act on me....a distraction tactic. Not an effective one, though. Little kids are more perceptive than most adults would like to think.

posted by Darson on May 11, 2010 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply

CORNCRAKE
You're right about that. The good ones get taken while the bad ones remain sometimes. It was obvious that Mother was nervous about something, that's for sure. Those tight sheets were ridiculous. To this day I cannot stand to have my comforters tucked in at all, I kick them free if they are.

posted by Darson on May 11, 2010 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu
That is your honest to goodness mothering instinct in you, my dear lady. Some have it, others do not. Just because one can pop out a bunch of kids does not a mother make.

posted by Darson on May 11, 2010 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

Darson
This is very powerful and ominous, particularly since you let the little girl speak...

posted by Nautikos on May 11, 2010 at 7:45 AM | link to this | reply

A fine job at building up to asking him the big question. I am sure he was stunned at your perceptive abilities.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 10, 2010 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

Robber
Nobody has a heart attack when you would like them too. Your mother is scared now, can it get worse?

posted by C_C_T on May 10, 2010 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

I can just see you and hear your little voice with the only bad person idea
you had and I just want topick upyou three little babies and run with you as afr and as fast as I can.

posted by Kabu on May 10, 2010 at 9:51 AM | link to this | reply