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Everything is flowing together nicely.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 1, 2010 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

this sounds like fun !

But to try again we must, for to persevere is just our nature,

by trying so, we earn respect and trust, and so hope to win God's favor.

When all seems lost, we rise again to champion on, not admit defeat,

to encourage others not to give in, while upon our backs, the tracks of many feet.

posted by Raysongs on May 1, 2010 at 12:28 PM | link to this | reply

Perseverance:
 

Alone, we drudge through the pulling mire
Inching forth toward what we desire
Sometimes helping one another along
At times getting trampled by the throng  

and as we go we bring with us
all that we are... all that we love
knowing  that as time goes by
what is not real will fall by the side
and so,  we walk through clouds
through water, through ice, through fire
just to find out that we have doubts
and after all we are just tired

Each victory symbolic of desire’s need
to reach the end, the final conquest of
a trek to ease the mind, to plant the seed
that grows among the ferns; below the Dove.
 

In this sacred place lies our fulfillment
Ever closer to the promised land
Rushing in to feel  the wonderment
Only to find it's nothing but sand
And in this state of darkened bewilderment
We realize we'd time to lend another a hand
But in out rapt and righteous commitment
We had no time for something small, but so grand

and so again alone, we beging thinking
we are better than all,  more than what we are
and with false pride we march on believing
that we can climb so high and reach so far
the gates of heaven will for sure  wide open swing
if we should decide this life to leave.

 

posted by Sinome on May 1, 2010 at 7:17 AM | link to this | reply