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This is so soft and yes, like a lullaby ~ I enjoyed the sweet lyrical movement. Elyse
great imagery.
posted by
elysianfields
on February 23, 2010 at 6:19 AM
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I like the way you take your work through the motions great read. Deep!
posted by
Mystereo
on February 21, 2010 at 3:42 AM
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posted by
RomaKay
on February 20, 2010 at 12:45 PM
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Rain
Sorry fem, I thought I was on a lady's page who told me I could say what I liked. I don't know how to delete comments or that one would have got the chop.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 20, 2010 at 12:00 PM
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Rain
If I am to be honest fem this is a beautiful poem if you want to know what I really think, its not a criticism, just a suggestion.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 20, 2010 at 10:42 AM
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