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posted by
RomaKay
on February 20, 2010 at 12:45 PM
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Strong writing!
posted by
Katray2
on February 18, 2010 at 9:54 PM
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$ In your poem I think that you go to war with yourself. It’s an exciting encounter perhaps sexual. BC-A, Bill’s R:):(st
posted by
BC-A
on February 18, 2010 at 6:15 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on February 18, 2010 at 5:52 PM
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I wonder if it is a boy with one of those spiky colored hair dos
and his Mum made him wash it out beforethe real Warrior returns from work and a war does errupt.
posted by
Kabu
on February 18, 2010 at 1:51 PM
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I think it takes a warrior to wage a war on love. I read it twice too.
posted by
shobana
on February 18, 2010 at 1:41 PM
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CORNCRAKE
I have no idea what this refers to. I read it over three times and could only arrive at the idea of a man awakening from a nightmare.Is that even close? I am not the sharpest knife in the drawer so don't be offended please my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 18, 2010 at 1:34 PM
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