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Wow, talk about a 'crush' ~ how sweet this poem truly - speaking of immature emotions and so humbly and then at the end the wisdom flows --- concisely.  You're a great poet in the making here Aba.  Certainly making one ponder and inspiring with each you pen.  Write on~ it's to our delight.  Ely

posted by elysianfields on February 11, 2010 at 2:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam
You're welcome and welcome! Your progress is sensational! sam

posted by sam444 on February 11, 2010 at 6:17 AM | link to this | reply

sam
It has been your appreciation and inspiration that turned and tuned me to transition from prose to poetry quickly, so thanksthanks&thanks.

posted by anib on February 11, 2010 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
The content and the tentatative words wording comes from my really having lived the experience.  She creates a flutter even to this day.Thank you and xoxox

posted by anib on February 11, 2010 at 6:08 AM | link to this | reply

A wonderful poem steeped in exquisite imagery! I continue to marvel at this new found love of yours and how well you have transition from prose to terse composing! I say kudos all the day long! sam

posted by sam444 on February 10, 2010 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

Wow... I loved this poem... it felt almost as if I were watching a childs dabbling into the adult standing by  the window of time but on the other side of the glass.  Truly amazing, from its content to the tentative wording  it was absolutely perfect!  Bravo!  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on February 10, 2010 at 9:45 AM | link to this | reply